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ocean view

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we tucked away
with salty dry hips
and whisper-talked.
we laughed and
dusted sand
from our grips.

i fell in love;
deep-
deeply in love
with the sea.
unusually short.

does this seem finished ?
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neonsquiggle's avatar
No, completely not unfinished. It makes me.. wistful. I adore the sea. (: